The development of tourism has contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think that this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

The
development
of
tourism
has contributed to
English
becoming the most prominent
language
in the
world
. Some
people
think that
this
will lead to
English
becoming the only
language
to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages
to
Change preposition
of

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

show examples
having one
language
in the
world
? The
development
of
tourism
has contributed to
English
becoming the most prominent
language
in the
world
. Some
people
think that
this
will lead to
English
becoming the only
language
to be spoken globally. The
development
of
tourism
has contributed to
English
becoming the most prominent
language
in the
world
. Some
people
think that
this
will lead to
English
becoming the only
language
to be spoken globally. The
development
of
tourism
has contributed to
English
becoming the most prominent
language
in the
world
. Some
people
think that
this
will lead to
English
becoming the only
language
to be spoken globally.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next: