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The development of tourism has contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think that this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

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 becoming the most prominent
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people
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 think that
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English
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? The
development
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 of
tourism
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 has contributed to
English
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 becoming the most prominent
language
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 in the
world
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. Some
people
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 think that
this
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 will lead to
English
Use synonyms
 becoming the only
language
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 to be spoken globally. The
development
Use synonyms
 of
tourism
Use synonyms
 has contributed to
English
Use synonyms
 becoming the most prominent
language
Use synonyms
 in the
world
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. Some
people
Use synonyms
 think that
this
Linking Words
 will lead to
English
Use synonyms
 becoming the only
language
Use synonyms
 to be spoken globally. The
development
Use synonyms
 of
tourism
Use synonyms
 has contributed to
English
Use synonyms
 becoming the most prominent
language
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 in the
world
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. Some
people
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 think that
this
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 will lead to
English
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 becoming the only
language
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 to be spoken globally.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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