With increasing populations and ever growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can be solved?

The given bar chart portrays the statistics of the use of
Internet
access in urban/suburban and rural houses of a particular country for consecutive
years
from 2011 to 2016. It is evident that the main trend of
Internet
use was skyrocketed overall in the given
years
in both
homes
. In 2011, city sided residences were using 15% of the
Internet
, which was almost fifth-folded than of country sided (3%). Both of them ballooned up in the
next
years
too, and in 2014, urban/suburban and rural
homes
used the
Internet
more than three times and five times from starting year, with 50% and 15%, respectively.
However
, the tendency became slower in the
last
2
years
for city
homes
with the exception of rural
homes
. It had exaggerated from 25% to 35%, for the rural area, but urban
homes
just showed an increase of 2%, (from 53% to 55%). So, the graph has shown the main inflation craze in rural dwellings compared to those of urban/suburban.
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