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Developments in tourism offer very little direct benefit for residents who live in these areas. To what extent do you agree?

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Across the globe,
tourism
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 is one of the biggest economies. Many countries developed their nation into a
tourist
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 spot.
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,
tourism
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 has offer few amount of profit to local resident
people
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. I completely disagree with
this
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 statement. There are several direct
benefits
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 for the local public due to
tourism
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. In the forthcoming, paragraphs I shall analyze my viewpoint on
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.
To begin
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 with, for many nations,
tourist
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 is the source of income for local as well government.
People
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 from all over the world go to some beautiful
places
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.
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, some
people
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 choose cheap
places
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 to travel where they do not want to spend much money but enjoy, fun, and excitement are more
such
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 as Thailand, Malaysia, Bangkok and many other coastal
places
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.
People
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 from these areas have opened their shops to sell local products for the
tourist
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. These major sources of money directly depend on the visitor.
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, In Bangkok, in my personal ,experience there are many small and big shops are opened from electronic goods to local products all are at reasonable prices. Many
people
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 bought so many things from them. They get a lot of
benefits
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 from the holidaymakers.
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, several others professions like the taxi driver,
tourist
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 guide, hotels, and restaurants all take direct advantages of
tourism
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. Whenever the
tourist
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 visit
tourist
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places
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,
first
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 they need a taxi to travel from one side to another. Nowadays, the internet has a detail of every country.
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, some prefer to hire a
tourist
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 guide how knows local as well as a foreign language. Another thing an explorer needs a hotel so that they can spend a night in there and in
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 a good restaurant where they eat local food. All they take the money and other
benefits
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 from them. In conclusion, a few decades ago, many countries make
tourism
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 the
first
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 economy of their nation. The government make
benefits
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 from
tourism
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.

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