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Some people believe that newspaper is the best way to learn about news while others believe that more effective way is through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In today's technological age, several country inhabitants say that the newsprint is the perfect way to keep abreast of the latest bulletin every day, while many deny
this
 and turn to broadcast.
This
 issue has become very prevalent and contentious these days, and given the predominance of both sources, a final judgment has been formed by me in the following article. On the one hand, newspapers are significant for getting the latest
information
 on everyday things, including having complete clarity of news.
In other words
, all the content we read in any publication that comes before us daily is accurate. The main reason for
this
 is that all the report is in front of us in written form.
Therefore
, trust in it becomes instinctive because no one can change the written
information
.
In addition
, our great-grandfathers are conventional to reading journals from the very beginning, which is why they
use
 the publication as a medium to get some
information
instead
 of the modern medium.
For example
, according to a survey in our country India today, sixty per cent of the people who require to get any latest
information
use
 the newspaper, out of which most people are seniors.
Thus
, it is vital to
use
 the newspaper to keep updated on any modifications in the world.
On the other hand
, despite the importance of the newspaper, the
media
 has a bizarre role and significance in its own right. Specifically, the news coming on the TV channels is reliable and speedy to get at home, as they confer every update to us very quickly.
Also
, it is very convenient to get the latest news through the
media
.
For instance
, all the
information
 we acquired from the
media
 about the Corona pandemic in India was very fast, including
information
 about the increase in victims and the loss;
Consequently
, being fast and convenient,
media
 is an easy way for us to get
information
.
Finally
, after I study the whole issue, from my perspective, the
use
 of publications for
information
 is inevitable;
however
, we cannot condemn the role of the
media
 in the modern age given its prominence because the
use
 of both mediums is essential in its own right.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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