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To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement that digital literacy is essential in today's society?"

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Without knowing about the operating information we can not use any technical application. It is very important to know the operation. Most of the daily routine work and studies are connected with technology. I strongly agree that knowing digitalization is important for all generations. To complete the routine tasks of daily life everyone is using digital applications which are in the palm of their hands. Mobile applications make various jobs easy but if someone does not know how to use them, It could be dangerous in
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 tech era.
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, Making payments after buying groceries. If someone does not know how to make payments it will be difficult to purchase anything from online stores and of course, financial fraud can be the result too. We all read
such
 information in daily newspapers. Nowadays, Education is online, Anyone can learn anything from digital resources. Students are using applications for study purposes but if we see in rural areas, Most of the education is paper-based because of the less awareness of using digitalization. Schools should provide them with special
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classes on how to operate it so students can benefit from those apps for better growth. Digital Literacy is extremely important. Even though safety precautions are taking their place and technical app providers provide the information on using the app even after having good knowledge, people become victims of digital fraud. The government and schools should spread awareness about technology usage in every part of society.
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