It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In the past, there were many untouched places
in
the earth, but, now most of these remotely located areas have been explored by not only Change preposition
on
holiday makers
Correct your spelling
holidaymakers
,
but researchers as well. As far as I am concerned Remove the comma
apply
this
trend equally brings both advantages and disadvantages to environment
. Add an article
the environment
This
essay will support my points in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, being explored these
hostile areas like Change preposition
in these
South
Pole, could light into the remote living. Correct article usage
the South
In other words
, how to live in an extreme climate lights answer to many mysteries of the earth: physical adaptions, dietary patterns and living styles of natives of these locations seem to provide some new ideas to science and technology, which, eventually, beneficial to the entire mankind to make necessary adaption to changing climate situations. However
, If explorations did not occur, we would unaware of possibility
of making Add an article
the possibility
adaptation
to counteract various environmental repercussions; Correct article usage
an adaptation
therefore
, this
is an astonishingly commendable step.
On the other hand
, despite the above mentioned
positives, I am seriously sceptical about expanding Add a hyphen
above-mentioned
tourism
industry to these vulnerable places. Correct article usage
the tourism
Although
visiting these can be a great personal achievement, the aftermath of this
could be huge since travelers
tend to behave Change the spelling
travellers
irresponsible
most of the time. To illustrate, in a BBC documentary, how much damage has been caused to Change the adjective
irresponsibly
South
Pole is so evident and thought-provoking. Correct article usage
the South
Native
population of both flora and fauna, which are highly susceptible to Add an article
The native
extinct
unless all governments act timely, the consequences might be irreparable, so in my opinion, Replace the word
extinction
this
is obviously a worrying situation.
In conclusion, looking into the two accepts of the exploration of visitors and research fellows, still
I am confused whether it is beneficial or harmful since it is too early to make an assumption. It is vital that under no circumstance, should damage the delicate nature for human benefits.Add a comma
,still
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite