More people are traveling today than ever before. Why do you think this is?

Travelling is
a
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easy thing in
present
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than compared to the previous time with the improvement of infrastructure all over the world. Earlier
travel
was not a popular thing and
people
couldn't be able to
travel
so far with the limited resources
thay
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they
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have. But the changes and improvement of roads, vehicles made
people
to
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travel
within seconds. Earlier most of the
people
travel
through ships if they wanted to
travel
one
country
to another
country
as airlines are not that much popular and
people
were not
afforable
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to do that. But
today
genaration
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generation

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is much more
differ
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than earlier. They love to
travel
even
for
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the town to
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the country

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countryside

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country side
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. That's why
today
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hospitality
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the hospitality

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industry is very popular in every
country
even with locals and foreigners.
Main
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The main

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reason for
travel
today
as I identified is to
relaxation
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for most
of
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apply

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the
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people
with their busy
shedules
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and routine work. Many
people
tend to
living
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live

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urban areas these days so they do not have enough space to living and even for
children
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,children

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they do not have space to play with their friends
intract
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interact

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with
environment
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the environment
an environment

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like past era. So,
today
most
of
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the
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parents are tended to
travel
with their children to
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country side
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countryside

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and reduce stress. Not only the local
travels
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travel

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foregin
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foreign

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travels
also
very popular
today
even with developing
country
like Sri Lanka with the enhancement of airline facilities. Having budget airlines and hotels made most of the middle-income peoples travelling dream come true as it was only designated for the higher-income
people
in past.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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