some people say that students should be given more homework. Others say that children should be free to enjoy their youth. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It has been suggested by some that an increasing amount of
homework
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homework
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school
. The reason is that if the young generations spend a considerable amount of their free Use synonyms
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are less likely to be misled by appalling information, which lowers the risk of committing crimes among children, Use synonyms
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homework
, they do not have enough energy and Use synonyms
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, the crime rate of adolescents is extremely low in China.
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On the other hand
, others, including me, believe that young children should be provided more quality Linking Words
time
to enjoy their life. The reason is that several subjects Use synonyms
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as maths and biology are less hands-on, tedious and complicated. If Linking Words
students
always immerse themselves into learning those subjects, their concentration and enthusiasm towards studying will be reduced, Use synonyms
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leading to poor academic performance. Linking Words
By contrast
, if they are able to enjoy their own Linking Words
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However
, they do not gain wonderful results at their national examination as they have not been passionate about studying.
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