You have discovered a lot of rubbish in a lake near where you live. In the past, the lake had always been clean. Write a letter to the local council. In the letter describe the type of rubbish that you saw in the lake explain where you think the waste has come from suggest what the council should do about the problem

Dear Mr Oliver, My name is Nancy, I live in 2/2a, Shakhristan street, Tashkent. I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention to the Amur
lake
condition located in Central Park. I used to have a beautiful and aesthetic view of the clean Amur
lake
from my kitchen window.
However
, now the
lake
looks disgusting with piles of plastic dishes and bags from the newly-built KFS fast food restaurant. Young people like to meet up with their friends at the KFC cafe and take away the food to eat outside.
Last
time, while taking a walk along the
lake
I couldn't watch all the plastic floating on the
lake
. I believe
this
can cause the ecosystem of the park in the long run. I would like to suggest a feasible solution for
this
issue. KFC should take all the responsibility for keeping the park territory, including the Amur
lake
clean from their products' waste. Looking forward to your appropriate actions. Yours Faithfully, Nancy
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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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