Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.

Countries
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become more and more similar in
product
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diversity because of transportation developments, and
people
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can buy the same
products
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anywhere in the
world
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. In my opinion,
access
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to the same
products
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has a lot of advantages. On the one hand, using the same
products
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may cause many harmful effects on local industries. When huge
companies
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can export their
product
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to all of the
countries
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in the
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, they gradually become wealthier.
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, smaller and local
companies
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become more vulnerable and are going to die. Big
companies
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reduce their expenses by mass production, and smaller
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can't compete with them. By
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approach, many local shops have to close inevitably.
For example
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, Chinese
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export their
product
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all over the
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and they have a lot of fans everywhere. In Iran, there were many shoe maker
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which they were forced to close because of the price differences.
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, in global prices and quality competition,
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strive to make satisfying
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for
people
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all over the
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.
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,
people
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have
access
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to high-quality yields everywhere in the
world
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.
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, when a company make a new
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by new technology, they can offer it to other
countries
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, and
people
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have the same right and
access
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to the latest
products
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.
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, Elon Musk invented a new low-priced cellphone with
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to the Starlink internet. His target is to export it to all
countries
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.
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,
people
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can use global high-speed internet with a high-quality, low-priced cellphone. In conclusion,
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using the same
products
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in the
countries
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has its drawbacks,
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as smaller
companies
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shutting down, there are more advantages, like
access
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to the latest technology with good qualities and prices all over the
world
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.

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Clarify your main argument more strongly in the introduction to make it clearer.
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Your conclusion summarizes the main ideas well and presents a clear opinion.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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