Some people think that mobile phones are harmful for children, while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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techonological

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technological

advancement, smart

devices

are becoming more available to everyone, especially

children

.

Although

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these gadgets bring great utility for human life, it is believed that they can be harmful

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youngsters while others disagree with

this

statement. In my

view point

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, it can be dangerous if we let our kids

use

these portable

devices

without any restrictions. I shall demonstrate my ideas in the following paragraph. Parents who support the

use

of mobile phone may argue that it can help them keep

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with their

children

while they are out of school.

For example

, many students tend to join extra activities after their class in various locations and telephones may be the perfect way to help families connect to them in emergency situations.

Moreover

, using these portable appliances may be a great alternative learning options compare to traditional books as youngsters can access education materials or attending lectures at

anytime

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.

For instance

, during the Covid lockdown, many schools have switched to online lectures which

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made tablets or smart

devices

become common among

children

for their learning.

On the other hand

,

over exposure

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to smart gadgets may make users become addicted and cause detrimental effects on health. Kids may become dependent users if they play on these

devices

too often, which may lead to the reduction of physical activities and eye problems. Some parents today apply tablets or phones as a source of distraction to their

children

so they can have more spare time and focus on their works.

This

may be

initially

effective,

however

, in

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term,

this

trend can change social behaviour and make toddlers feel inactive or refuse to play with others.

Additionally

, popular applications

such

as Facebook, messenger or Instagram have become very popular, which can be compatible on mobile

devices

.

As a result

, students can easily access

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these applications through their phones during class and neglect lectures at schools, which eventually reduce their concentration and learning outcomes. To avoid

this

, some universities have restricted the

use

of

cellphones

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during study time. To sum up, technology has undoubtedly brought great benefits for human,

however

, unlimited

use

of these inventions may underline potential drawbacks to younger generations.