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Describing maps took place in the coastal town of Youngsille between 1980 and 2005

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The map shows the developments which took place in the coastal town of
Youngsille
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Youngsville
 between 1980 and 2005. In 1980, The town was a much greener residential area with a large number of trees and individual houses, but during the
next
 25 years, the town experienced a number of dramatic changes. The most noticeable is that all of the trees south of the
River
 Alana were cut down,
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 with all the houses along the railway line being with factories and warehouses sprang up around the airport and school. Only a few trees north of the
river
 remained. The woodland was cleared to make way for a park, a golf course, and car parking facilities.
Further
 developments were the construction of a stadium near the
north-east
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 corner of the lake and a new stretch of the railway from the
river
 running directly north. A marina was
also
 built at the mouth of the
river
. Overall, a comparison of the two maps reveals a change from a largely rural to a mainly urban landscape.
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