Some people think that only the government can make significant changes in society, while others think that individuals can have a lot of influence. What is your opinion?

It is considered by many

intelectuals

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intellectuals

that only the government can have the authority and power to make

influcential

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influential

changes to

society

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.

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, others opine differently, stating that in certain situations, the power of individuals should

also

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be

ackhowledged

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acknowledged

.

Perpectively

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Perspective

, I think that most of the most significant changes are made by government officials and my supporting

arguements

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arguments

will be given

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.

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, the government has a role to govern

society

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as a whole, which means that they have the ability to make major

socio economic

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adjustments.

State

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authorities could promulgate certain policies, affecting the

livelyhoods

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livelihoods

of the common public.

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,

as a result

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of Covid-19, a lockdown was ordered which played a

quitissential

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quintessential

role in obstructing the spread of the

diesease

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disease

.

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, making laws is one of the most

crutial

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crucial

critical

ability

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that the

state

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have

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. Being able to grant laws that prevent either the

distruction

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destruction

of the environment or to prevent crime in general extremely influential.

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,

society

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had witnessed various major individuals and movements by communities that have had

massive

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impact on the world. To make an example,

personel

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personal

like Elon Musk have made major contributions to

society

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through either philanthropy or scientific efforts as well as, the black lives matter movement which have

affect

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the world significantly.

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, some governmental decisions

requires

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the authorization of the public,

thus

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ordinary people could play a role in influencing future policies. In conclusion, while most impactful adjustments are made by

state

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officials, the common public

also

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have

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a

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potential in influencing the globe significantly by either affecting the decisions of the

state

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,

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or staging important movements that might affect the world drastically.