You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and services. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter • Give details of your visit to the restaurant • Explain the reason for the celebration • Say what was good about the food and the service.

Dear Mr.Gill, I believe that you are the General Manager of the Tikka Junction in Brampton, and So I am writing
this
letter to you to express my gratitude for serving us a delicious meal during our visit to your restaurant,
last
Tuesday. The reason for our visit was to through a surprise party for one of our friends as she just cleared her exam for Register Nurse on her first attempt.
Thus
, we made a plan to surprise her. After checking reviews of many restaurants in the town we found
this
location.
Firstly
, I would like to thank your team. They were very welcoming, polite and organized.
Furthermore
, they provided us with quick and mindblowing service. Their way of greeting us was incredible.
Secondly
, your menu options are great. Your Tuesday's specials for appetizers shocked everyone because of the reasonable prices.
First,
we ordered appetizers
such
as Paneer Tikka, Soya Champ and Malai Champ for just starting.
Then
in the main course, we had the chef's favourites Shahi Paneer, Daal Makhni and Garlic breads for everyone. Everything was beyond my expectations. Everyone enjoyed the fresh and hot food.
Apart from
this
, your team members were checking with us every 5 to 10 minutes. I really like their service and hard work. I am very thankful to you and your team for your amazing services and hope to visit your location soon. Yours Sincerely, Harmandeep Kaur
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task achievement
Maintain a balance between formal and friendly tone in letters to a manager.
coherence cohesion
The structure is clear and logical, making it easy to follow the main points.
coherence cohesion
Opening and closing of the letter are well executed, providing a polite and respectful tone.
task achievement
The letter hits all the points requested in the prompt, providing a complete and thorough response.

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