Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult to live such as Sahara desert or Antarctica. Do advantages outweight the disadvantage of live there .

Technology has been developing dramatically for the

last

two decade. Almost every people have and use a

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mobile

phone for

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purpose

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.

However

, paying for stuff through cell phone is becoming popular in recent days. I think

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improvments

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improvements

give more demerits

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that

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merits .

This

essay will discuss both the viewpoint in the upcoming paragraph.

To begin

with, there are several advantages of

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to that places . The predominant one is that

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we can gain the superior experience that

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a crucial role in our life . To elaborate

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, if we go there any person can test abilities, that he or she will live there or not and put themselves out from their comfort zone.

Moreover

, a person can experience an adventurous trip

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in order

inorder

to entertain themselves after the hectic lifestyle.

For instance

, the headline in 'Moscow Time ' revealed that every year the Indians

vist

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visit

these destinations, so they can relish themselves.

Hence

, these two are the main benefits of going there .

On the other hand

, there are a plethora of drawbacks of

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there .

First

and foremost is that there is a chance that we can affect our health .

In other words

, since the humans go

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Antarctica, they don't have enough knowledge

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to survive there in extremely cold and

this

result in negative on

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health .

In addition

, the multifarious individuals died because there is no one to help in

Sahara

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desert.

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, In

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Sahara

desert

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every year peoples lost life , as humans cannot call

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any one

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for assist.

Thus

, these are the demerits of visiting there . To conclude,

although

folks gain an altruistic experience as well as enjoy

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journey, the person lost their life and have an adverse effect on their health.