Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult to live such as Sahara desert or Antarctica. Do advantages outweight the disadvantage of live there .

Technology has been developing dramatically for the
last
two decade. Almost every people have and use a
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However
, paying for stuff through cell phone is becoming popular in recent days. I think
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merits .
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essay will discuss both the viewpoint in the upcoming paragraph.
To begin
with, there are several advantages of
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to that places . The predominant one is that
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we can gain the superior experience that
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a crucial role in our life . To elaborate
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, if we go there any person can test abilities, that he or she will live there or not and put themselves out from their comfort zone.
Moreover
, a person can experience an adventurous trip
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in order
inorder
to entertain themselves after the hectic lifestyle.
For instance
, the headline in 'Moscow Time ' revealed that every year the Indians
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visit
these destinations, so they can relish themselves.
Hence
, these two are the main benefits of going there .
On the other hand
, there are a plethora of drawbacks of
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there .
First
and foremost is that there is a chance that we can affect our health .
In other words
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Antarctica, they don't have enough knowledge
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to survive there in extremely cold and
this
result in negative on
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health .
In addition
, the multifarious individuals died because there is no one to help in
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desert.
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Sahara
desert
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every year peoples lost life , as humans cannot call
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any one
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for assist.
Thus
, these are the demerits of visiting there . To conclude,
although
folks gain an altruistic experience as well as enjoy
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journey, the person lost their life and have an adverse effect on their health.
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