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More and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books. What are the reasons for this? What problems can this cause for libraries?

#people #e-books #paper #books #libraries
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 are more significant and it has
powerhouse
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 of information and knowledge about any field, not only that it is referred to as a humans best friend but
also
, they are extremely beneficial for mankind and have helped it evolve. In
this
 21st century number of
people
 using
e-
books
, which are tremendously
populare
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popular
 and affordable,
people
 can use
it
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 from
anytime
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 anywhere
as a result
less
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 uses
of
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for
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 paper
books
.
This
 essay will
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showcase
so case
 both aspects in the following paragraph with the relevant examples. To
begain
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begin
 with the key reasons of using
e-
books
 are cost
effictive
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effective
, without investing any amount masses could use it and read it from anywhere,
besides
,
people
 would not have to carry paper
books
 which would
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occupy
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 space in
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also
 it would be heavy.
For example
, because of the
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internet
internaet
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 it is easy to find
e-
books
 online through any websites or mobile application
such
 as amazon it
provide
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 both
audio
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audios
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 to listen
as
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 well as
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text
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textbook
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book
 to read. The survey conducted by
eduction
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education
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 authority that who can able to afford
book
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the book
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 and how many
people
 would not able to buy because of poverty.
Furthermore
, the result was astonished, only 35% of high class together with
middle class
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 masses could purchase
books
 and 65% poor
people
 reused old
books
 or use
e-
books
,
hence
 it is proved that
books
 are costly so only
few
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people
 could manage to buy it.
On the other hand
, it is not
neglectable
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the
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fact that
because of
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the
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e-
books
it
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directly
have
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 an adverse effect on the
libraries
. The
libraries
 plays important role in every country, through that government able to earn profit and could invest that amount into developing infrastructure.
Moreover
,
book
 information centres provide occupation for inhabitants,
also
people
 would find
books
 related to ancient history, old newspapers, or any data that they were looking for.
Nevertheless
, the reading-rooms is the best way to find pin drop silence places where
people
 not only go for reading
books
 but
also
 they could study, gain knowledge and easily concentrate on
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 topic.
In addition
, it the only
e-
books
 will available so
libraries
 become diminish along with, it impacts on entrepreneur publishing new
books
. To conclude, considering above mentioned points it is evident that, despite the
fact
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e-
books
has
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 various benefits but it has a negative effect not only on
libraries
 but
also
 on the economy and jobs.
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