Some claim that studying abroad has great benefits for a student’s home country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

, new network and
which students can bring from abroad will definitely have benefits for the home
. Living in another culture will have a positive effect on the person as well as a new view from another perspective. I strongly believe that information can be applied and used in different situations
as in politics or social life.
of all, it is a network. During studying a student will have new friends and as a
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will have colleges in the future.
relationships will give perspective,
for instance
sharing or someone who can help or give
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advice to solve complex situations. Another example, when a student returns to their hometown they will start finding a job and will apply all new
. But from time to time he could have problems without any ideas how to solve them but as he has a network - he always can request help. From my point of ,view it is really practical.
, it is an
of living in a foreign
and another different culture.
is a good point that allows pupils to compare their own environment to others.
will produce new fresh ideas on what to improve or what could be changed in the home
as well as new views on common things. From my ,perspective it is
one of the main points. In conclusion, whole
acquired abroad could be applied to enrich the student's motherland.
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it will have a positive effect on the person as well as on the
in general.
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