Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to but local products?

Big companies have much money to destinate for marketing and promotion purpose and
this
bring
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people to purchase their goods.
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essay will explain that the main problem of
this
situation is the closing of traditional and historical small businesses that have characterized local villages and how the reduction of taxation may represent the right
choise
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choice
choose
to increase the popularity of local companies.
First
of all, the principal issue of multinational firms is the elimination of any possible competition for small
shops
.
This
situation leads to a big reduction
of
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sales because for the
costumers
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customers
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is more convenient
buy
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products on online
shops
that have lower prices. Nowadays, is easier to see a failure of
typical
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store and at the same time the birth of chain stores that are spread all over the world.
For example
, in the centre of
Rimini
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many famous
shopa
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shops
shop
shoppe
s that have characterized the city for generations are
disappering
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disappearing
due to the impossibility to face the strategies big businesses can use. The most practical solution to
this
problem is lowering the
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amount
of tax which small
shops
have to pay. Through
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operations
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firms can be able to reduce their prices and
to
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attract buyers. In fact, even if they gain less money selling products, they will have bigger earnings
as a result
of the reduction of duties.
For example
, in Italy taxes represent the largest expense for the company about
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45% of their
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revenues
and
this
reform might enhance the
strenght
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strength
and
competitive
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of small companies. To conclude, an institutional law is the best option to let the small businesses
to
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face the power of big ones which have bigger budgets and can bring the closure of traditional
shops
that are the soul of a city.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • over-reliance
  • disrupts
  • entrepreneurship
  • economic diversity
  • monopolistic
  • financial power
  • homogenization
  • awareness campaigns
  • tax incentives
  • sustainability
  • artisan
  • eco-friendly
  • dominate
  • innovation
  • stifle
  • richness
  • cultures
  • traditions
  • highlighting
  • distinguish
  • superior
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