In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner. Discuss both systems and state which one do you think is better. Give reasons and relevant examples for your answer.

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Marriage
is an unforgettable event in everyone’s life.it is believed by some
individuals
that , all the arrangements regarding marriages should be done by guardians, while others perceive that
individuals
should have the right to select their companions.
This
essay will examine both the arguments and draws a logical conclusion in the end. To commence with, some people deem that marriages should be managed by
parents
,because they have lived half of their
life
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in
marriage
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the marriage
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relationship.
hence
, they have more knowledge about , how to find
correct
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partner for their children in terms of ;behaviour, characteristics and traits because
this
things
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matters the most while selecting
parents
.
Parents
also
believe that adults are too young to understand
this things
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that
is
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why
parents
ought to pick companion for youngsters.
For instance
,
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in India
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India
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marriage
are not happen
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does not happen
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between 2
individuals
they happen with 2 families and that’s why in India
parents
always show interference when it comes to
choose
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choosing
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partners for their own children.
On the other hand
, some people think that
,
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individuals
should be the one who selects their own partners because mutual
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between two persons should be prioritised the most.
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there are some other factors too which
plays
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major
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a major
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role in selecting
soulmate
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a soulmate
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.
Firstly
, educational qualifications should be the same between the two who ties the know so they do not feel superiority complex.
Secondly
, before getting married couples should stay with each
another
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in
live in
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relationship term which is in the trend recently.
However
, I personally believe that
marriage
is a
person
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decision and
individuals
should take responsibility to select their partners because of
aforementioned
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reasons. In conclusion,
parents
also
play
indispensable
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role in children’s life but after
certain
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age
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they should give their children chances
made
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their own verdicts.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Arranged marriage
  • Love marriage
  • Autonomy
  • Cultural compatibility
  • Family support
  • Emotional connection
  • Individual freedom
  • Life experience
  • Practical decisions
  • Social compatibility
  • Economic compatibility
  • Mutual affection
  • Unity
  • Stability
  • Wisdom
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