In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner. Discuss both systems and state which one do you think is better. Give reasons and relevant examples for your answer.

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Marriage

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is an unforgettable event in everyone’s life.it is believed by some

individuals

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that , all the arrangements regarding marriages should be done by guardians, while others perceive that

individuals

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should have the right to select their companions.

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essay will examine both the arguments and draws a logical conclusion in the end. To commence with, some people deem that marriages should be managed by

parents

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,because they have lived half of their

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marriage

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the marriage

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relationship.

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, they have more knowledge about , how to find

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partner for their children in terms of ;behaviour, characteristics and traits because

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matters the most while selecting

parents

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Parents

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believe that adults are too young to understand

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this things

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that

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why

parents

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ought to pick companion for youngsters.

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in India

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India

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marriage

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are not happen

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between 2

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they happen with 2 families and that’s why in India

parents

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always show interference when it comes to

choose

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partners for their own children.

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, some people think that

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individuals

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should be the one who selects their own partners because mutual

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between two persons should be prioritised the most.

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Moreover

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there are some other factors too which

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major

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role in selecting

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, educational qualifications should be the same between the two who ties the know so they do not feel superiority complex.

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, before getting married couples should stay with each

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live in

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relationship term which is in the trend recently.

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, I personally believe that

marriage

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is a

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decision and

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should take responsibility to select their partners because of

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reasons. In conclusion,

parents

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indispensable

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role in children’s life but after

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age

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they should give their children chances

made

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their own verdicts.

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Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

296 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Arranged marriage
Love marriage
Autonomy
Cultural compatibility
Family support
Emotional connection
Individual freedom
Life experience
Practical decisions
Social compatibility
Economic compatibility
Mutual affection
Unity
Stability
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