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Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

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Dear Zoie, How are you? I’m glad to hear that you have decided to learn how to drive and I’m more than happy to give guidance and tips. Getting a driving license is no doubt very useful. You can move around the city, without depending on others for transportation. When you have a license you can drive the vehicle yourself. I would recommend that you go to a driving school in order to master the
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 of driving. I know there is a couple of good driving school around the neighbourhood, but I personally recommend the “A-List Driving School”. They have well-trained instructors and staff,
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 they have good packages with fixed driving hours. I suggest you make the optimum use of the given time.
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 the official website of the” Road Transport Department” it has lots of useful materials that you can read and follow.
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it is not a reason to be sad. You could sign up for more additional driving hours and take the exam again. I’m sure with more practice, comes more confidence which can help in passing the test. I wish you all the best, Paulo
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Driving licence
  • Public transportation
  • Independence
  • Daily commutes
  • Emergency transportation
  • Self-reliance
  • Structured learning environment
  • Professional driving instructors
  • Advanced driving techniques
  • Safety awareness
  • Flexible timings
  • Weather conditions
  • Basic vehicle maintenance
  • Traffic signs
  • Theory test material
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