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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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It is being considered
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 to have a specific
career
.
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life;
one
 should have many careers to make money, as per
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trend
. It is believed by many nowadays that, it has become difficult to survive in
this
 modern world with
one
 single
career
. Where technology is evolving every day, it has become
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 for people to become
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 in their fields to compete with these technological changes.
Additionally
,
also
 it is true that multi
career
 individuals are being paid higher remunerations than those who
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posses
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 single
career
education
. It is being adopted by many companies, to hire a single person who knows multi-tasking and can handle different tasks at the same time.
This
 saves huge money
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 companies.
However
,
alternative
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 approach to
this
trend
 is that
,
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 some people consider
this
trend
 detrimental to human’s health and condemns its spread. They believe that, if people are having several careers, there may be extra pressure on their mind and that will directly affect their health. If a person is handling cash in a bank, with huge transactions and company added cheques handling responsibility
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 his job duties as well,
this
 will be additional pressure.
Furthermore
,
this
trend
 potentially puts
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 burden on parents, as having qualifications in different careers could cost a lot. It would be impossible for
middle class
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 parents to bear their children's
education
 cost
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 if they are having more than
one
 child.
Although
 it is helpful for
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individuals to have more than
one
career
 and have diversified
education
, it should not be made mandatory for all, as it is not possible for everyone.
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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