The charts below show the amount of income per household spent on different items in the UK in 2010 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the amount of income per household spent on different items in the UK in 2010 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and pie chart
give
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information about the amount of sum in the UK
as well as
British people spent their
income
on various commodities between 2010 and 2013. Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that there was an upward trend in
British’s
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income
over a three-year period.
Such
an
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trend was not seen in the figure for their payment, which rose.
In addition
, the percentage spent on fruits and vegetables rose significantly in 2013. From the table, it is easy to see that British people possessed a total
income
of 29,000 in 2010, compared with the cost of items which they had to pay account for nearly one
second
of their sum.
By comparison
, there was a slight decline to 25,000 in their
income
in 2013.
Nevertheless
, the expenditure increased by 1,000 over the
next
three years. Turning to the
pies
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chart, it can be seen that there was an increase in the percentage of fruits and vegetables from 2010 to 2013.
Similarly
, the percentage of dairy products rose to 20
percent
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.
On the other hand
, 22 and 15
percent
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of spending
on
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clothes and meat,
fish
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and fish
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respectively in 2013.
However
, these items decreased
of
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by
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10
percent
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per cent
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in both after 3 years later. Meanwhile, other food and drink remained stable at 18
percent
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per cent
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during the period shown.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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  • expenditure
  • percentage
  • household income
  • categories
  • comparison
  • increase/decrease
  • stable
  • proportion
  • highlight
  • illustrate
  • fluctuate
  • markeda change
  • significant
  • trend
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