Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by advertising is the best way to make
people
buy products, While there are others who think that not many
people
care
about
advertisement
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of things. In my opinion, advertising of the
product
is more attractive for
people
who
care
about brands, design, and trends, but some
people
exist who think only
a
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particular brand and their favourite. On the one hand, there
are
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a variety of commercial
advertisement
and public
advertisement
. Some
advertisement
is made like film, is including some stories as well. It gives
people
make to think again,
Also
these
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gives
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people
feels touching, pleasure, sad it means that
people
can think again and choose the
product
again. Especially in terms of public advertising like stop smoking, stop suiciding-it is including
number
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for
counseling
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. When
people
that kind of
advertisement
.
People
accepted what they
says
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and
people
can call them. It is important for
people
’s health and lives.
On the other hand
, some
people
that they do not really
care
about
advertisement
.
For example
, In these days, too
many
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advertising everywhere so some of them hate
advertisement
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of the
product
.
Firstly
,
people
has
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a favourite things
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, brands and
company
,
therefore
, they just buy the
product
from a particular
company
.
For example
, like apple, Samsung, LG. because these are a big
company
and already has a good quality of products. What’s
more
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advertising is very similar
in
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these days. They
product
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a similar quality of the
product
.
Finally
, in my opinion, sometimes advertising has a high effect
at
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consuming products for
people
because those
gives
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pleasure and very creative which
people
never thought.
In
contrast
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people
who
has
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already a particular
company
and brand it is not necessary
it
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. In conclusion, some public
advertisement
is a good effect
for
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people
’s health and lives. But some
people
do not
care
even hate commercial
advertisement
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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