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Today, people in many countries can live and work anywhere they choose, because of improved cospommunication technology and tranrt. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

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 contemporary era, Due to vast digitalization and enhanced transportation working remote have become a blessing.There is no doubt that
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enormous
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 amount of countries have
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the facility
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 of working and living from anywhere for an individual.While there are two merits of these benefits
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 as low infrastructure expenses and reduced time consumption in commuting for
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 there are
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 drawbacks like poor quality of tasks and communication gaps due to geographical regions. To commence with,The most
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 benefit of technological advancement is
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 of saving
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manufacturing costs.
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 policies allows many companies to take advantage of it and reduced the
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 facilities cost
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 as electricity,cafeteria.
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, the time travel to
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 been reduced since candidates can
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 from home meanwhile managers are now focusing on
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resource utilisation. To illustrate a plentiful of global organisations have started working remote policy and no longer procure or lease any building for office premises as well as resources no longer need to
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 hefty traffic and spend their hours in it.
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 resulted in inflation in profit as well as productivity of
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 segment has seen major growth.
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 are drawbacks
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sub standard
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 of the events and misunderstanding in communication in a few areas.
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because
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authentic
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 feeling of workspace and make us fatigue
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 many people
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 challenges as meeting
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 to
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 resolve multiple conflicts.
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 :- A handful of individuals lives with their family which makes their home office chaotic and they couldn't focus on it like the office premises
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person
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 meetings can fix many business problems where email or text communications failed.
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, working and living in a particular region is equally important in order to maintain the business. To conclude,
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 relaxed norms and advanced technology of many countries gives
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 advantage to their citizens it
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 disturbs
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work life
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 balances. The advantages
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 outweigh the disadvantages as having the aid to
work
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 from anywhere increases business revenue and companies can utilise time effectively.
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