Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

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Today a lot of countries provide social welfare to
people
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which can support the long period searching
of
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a
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job.
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, my firm conviction is that in return
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providing by authorities,
people
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should be involved in community
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for the betterment of not only society but
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the country. Attracting job-seekers could
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the national spirit and educated
people
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to be more responsive to different community's
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, the huge number of sick children in hospitals need simple communication and moral support.
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, to attract individuals will get to know the problems faced by some persons and help volunteers to be more responsible towards his or her nation.
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, if the children will learn new things in life and get positive emotions from other
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help them to feel better and may recover
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diseases. The organizationт
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events by the government
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may improve the relationship of
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to their country.
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, taking part in
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events may develop feelings of
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of
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their country and contribute themselves to
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event
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,
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kind of
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could improve
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skills of volunteers and the ability to
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in a huge team for their future
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experiences.
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arrangement will help recipients of unemployment privileges to give something back to
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society, in lieu of support they receive, and aid in the government saving money
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spent on paying salaries to workers. To conclude, there are many pros of making the voluntary task compulsory for job-seekers who draw benefits from the states. I believe that voluntary
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better
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than unemployment because it could develop
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in social and emotional areas,
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to feel the belonging to activities of countries.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Driving licence
  • Public transportation
  • Independence
  • Daily commutes
  • Emergency transportation
  • Self-reliance
  • Structured learning environment
  • Professional driving instructors
  • Advanced driving techniques
  • Safety awareness
  • Flexible timings
  • Weather conditions
  • Basic vehicle maintenance
  • Traffic signs
  • Theory test material
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