Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips
Today a lot of countries provide social welfare to
people
which can support the long period searching of
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for
a
job. Change preposition
for a
However
, my firm conviction is that in return services
providing by authorities, Change preposition
for services
people
should be involved in community work
for the betterment of not only society but also
to
the country.
Attracting job-seekers could Change preposition
apply
enhanced
the national spirit and educated Change the verb form
enhance
people
to be more responsive to different community's problem
. Fix the agreement mistake
problems
For instance
, the huge number of sick children in hospitals need simple communication and moral support. Hence
, to attract individuals will get to know the problems faced by some persons and help volunteers to be more responsible towards his or her nation. Moreover
, if the children will learn new things in life and get positive emotions from other people
, this
will also
help them to feel better and may recover their
diseases.
The organizationт Change preposition
from their
national
events by the government Change preposition
of national
also
may improve the relationship of people
to their country. For example
, taking part in sport
events may develop feelings of Change the noun form
sports
proud
Replace the word
pride
of
their country and contribute themselves to Change preposition
in
tremendous
Add an article
the tremendous
event
. Fix the agreement mistake
events
Furthermore
, this
kind of work
could improve organization
skills of volunteers and the ability to Correct article usage
the organization
work
in a huge team for their future work
experiences. Moreover
, this
arrangement will help recipients of unemployment privileges to give something back to the
society, in lieu of support they receive, and aid in the government saving money Correct article usage
apply
otherwise
spent on paying salaries to workers.
To conclude, there are many pros of making the voluntary task compulsory for job-seekers who draw benefits from the states. I believe that voluntary work
better
than unemployment because it could develop Add a missing verb
is better
people
in social and emotional areas, also
to feel the belonging to activities of countries.Submitted by Мария Сидельникова on
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.