Many people believe that the priority of the government should be to ensure a growing economy. While others believe that the government should focus its efforts on uplifting the less fortunate? Discuss both views.
The majority of the
people
in the country
think that developing an economy
of a country
should be considered first
by the administration. Meanwhile, the rest of others thinks that poor people
in a country
should be at the top of the priority list. In this
essay, I would discuss the territory economy
level and the unwealthy people
.
Firstly
, by improving the growth rate of an economy
we can elevate the living standards of the people
by bringing more goods and services to the country
. Secondly
, the unemployment rate of society is decreased. For instance
, we can offer more jobs to underprivileged people
by developing a new industry. And to that, we may also
reduce the overall expense of the people
who are living in the society.
However
, we should also
give equal importance to the less fortunate people
. Because poverty is the disgraceful and unjust condition that has always haunted humankind. It divides the people
into classes like high class and low class. And it also
leads to diversity among the people
. so the authority must take effective measures for the people
. for instance
, an equal educational system for all, scholarships for below poverty line people
, or to the first
graduate people
in a family.
In conclusion, Economic growth leads to better living standards for the people
. While considering the poor people
we can improve the overall development of the economy
of the country
. So, the administration should give parallel importance to the economy
and the less fortunate people
.Submitted by Mohammed abdul
on
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