In many cities there is little control on the design and the construction of new homes and office building, people can build houses in their own style . What are the advantages and disadvantges of this situation ?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Architectural diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Personal taste
  • Economic boost
  • Tourists
  • Architects
  • Investors
  • Enhanced functionality
  • Uniformity
  • Cityscape
  • Aesthetic appeal
  • Safety standards
  • Potential hazards
  • Property value
  • Future buyers
  • Environmental impact
  • Waste management
  • Energy efficiency norms
  • Green building practices
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