Some people today prefer to get advice for medical problems and do not want to visit a doctor. Why is this? Is this a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays,
medical
side is open for everyone who Correct article usage
the medical
take
knowledge. All popularity Change the verb form
takes
have
nearly 20 Change the verb form
has
percent
command on medical education. So, some human beings get preference to take advice for Change the spelling
per cent
health
issue. In my Add an article
a health
the health
thinking
it is Add a comma
,thinking
positive
process because today living style is vast . but , Add an article
a positive
sometime
taking appointment of Replace the word
sometimes
doctor
is much
better option.
Add an article
a much
the much
To begin
with, younger are not interested to visit a doctor
because they have busy
schedule Correct article usage
a busy
any way
, they prefer to get information via Replace the word
anyway
internet
. Add an article
the internet
For example
, in metro
city travelling time is nearly 2-3 hours. Due to Correct article usage
a metro
these reason
, they choose online Change the determiner
this reason
these reasons
consultation
and then
take medicines.
Secondly
, some family they do not have ability
as well as they are afraid to Add an article
the ability
face
physician because they shy to discuss their issue face
to face
. Although
, they go with take
advice from home and overcome from health problems. Change the verb form
taking
for instance
, some women related health affection, ladies do not share their problems frequently in front of a doctor
. Moreover
, they prefer online treatment.
Thirdly
, digital conference are
available Change the verb form
is
in
Change preposition
on
different
type of sites as well as many application are Add an article
a different
their
. Replace the word
there
Moreover
, medicines are also
accessible online via application
. Add an article
the application
an application
In
Change preposition
On
Correct article usage
the other
other hand
, it is sometimes positive Change the wording
another hand
other hands
furthermore
its
negative. For Replace the word
it's
it is
this
purpose, people
should take online consultation
. on the other hand
, for other treatment like scanning, X- ray
, MRI etc. they have to meet Add a hyphen
X-ray
doctor
. If they don’t follow Add an article
the doctor
a doctor
these
therapy Correct determiner usage
this
then
they get injured for lifetime
.
To be specific, every physician Add an article
a lifetime
do
not have Change the verb form
does
online
service . equally, in Correct article usage
an online
covid-19
pandemic Correct article usage
the covid-19
situation
some Add a comma
,situation
people
get online therapy as well as medicines but they have to visit doctor
for collecting blood sample as well as sometimes for scanning Add an article
a doctor
the doctor
also
. But one problem is that,
at the situation of breathing problem they have Remove the comma
apply
bed
with Add an article
a bed
the bed
oxygen
cylinder and because of increasing cases Add an article
an oxygen
people
can not find bed
in their nearest hospital. Add an article
a bed
the bed
That is
the main Correct your spelling
drawback
draw back
of online Correct your spelling
drawback
consultation
other doctor
don’t know about Change the wording
doctors
people
history to do immediate therapy.
Lastly
, in my conclusion, “ every coin has two side” online advices
save time and they are needful for Change the wording
advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
emergency
but, Add an article
an emergency
face
to face
consultation
is also
beneficial for human. they go for both as per situation
.Add an article
the situation
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