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‘All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school.’ How far do you agree with this proposal? How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language?

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In recent years, an increasing number of parents are aspiring their child to learn a foreign
language
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, especially at the start of school age. Personally, It seems to me that there are many possibilities for students
to begin
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 primary education, I will explain why. In the
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 place, primary school’s bilingual pupils tend to have as well as improved memory, concentration, and mental flexibility. Studying whatever
language
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 is will study the country’s culture. Perhaps people should learn of the nation’s usage of vocabulary, tone of speech, and style of pronunciation as like their mother
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. The introduction of an international
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 and mother-tongue together
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 school might allow easy installation in their mind.
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, they can write and memorize a word in two different ways;
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 an opportunity for saving time in later learning another
language
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. Another major reason is that knowledge of different languages assists them to research in technology, science, and international business.
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 to say, a way to double the flow of information you receive. As a research result, students who pursue
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 studies from childhood
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 tend to score better to benefit from academic progress in other subjects. Opponents of
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 view say some students might confuse different alphabets. In European countries, some alphabets have similar shapes and different pronunciations. Children use it by mistake and
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, do not know both languages. To conclude, young children at the early stage in educational institutions should be allowed to learn different languages which they choose. There are many advantages to children.
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