Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices will help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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pollution

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is a major drawback of

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system. To cope

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, some suggest that

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government

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should invest in public

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and reduce the prices of tickets. In my opinion,

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, I will present my views. Public

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has made our life easy. But the major issue with

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systems like buses and trains is they rely on fossil fuel as a source of energy. Combustion of these fuels releases carbon and greenhouse gases which leads to global warming. To reduce these effects

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should invest on renewable energy sources

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as solar energy to drive the engine of these

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mediums.

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, by reducing the price of tickets, more and more people are going to use public

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rather than their personal cars.

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traffic on the road will be reduced, leading to less noise

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and air

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.

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, the

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of air

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can be sorted out by reforestation. As tree absorbs carbon dioxide from the atmosphere, the gases produced by trains can be taken up by trees

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reducing

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.I believe that investing in reforestation, increasing green spaces,

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problem

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of

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can be tackled.

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investing

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system,

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should invest

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promoting

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and reforestation, planting more trees in homes and public

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to reduce the

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of

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. To summarize, investment in public

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and reducing ticket prices,

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can address the

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of

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,

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spend on increasing green spaces to reduce

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.