People should look after their health as a duty to the society where they live, rather than their own benefits, to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is suggested that paying attention to personal
health
is
people
’s
duty
to
society
while their own thing.
However
, I think that
this
statement does not apply to all cases. I believe that regarding personal
health
as a
duty
of
society
should be encouraged. It is undeniable that the public shares the medical service offered by the government, and the government
also
invest in other social services
such
as maintaining infrastructure, allocating subsidies for unemployed
people
, etc. If the demand for medical service increase, the government has to allocate more funding to them, which will lead to the drop of financial support in other social aspects, impairing the development of the whole social services.
For instance
, unemployed
people
might not receive the social subsides in time.
Therefore
, it may stimulate crimes like robbery, undermining social stability.
Nevertheless
, if some
people
still living in distress and hunger, it is impossible for them to look after their
health
as a
duty
to
society
.
People
in
the
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impoverished area cannot have
this
high-level understanding of their
health
meaning because making living has already difficult for them.
For example
, if a natural disaster destroying the environment where some
people
live , the only thing for them is to consider how to survive in
such
circumstance.
In addition
, some governments do not dedicate themselves to improving social services for local residents so that these
people
do not have a sense of belonging to their
society
, which cannot make them make efforts to do something contributing to their
society
. In conclusion, since the living conditions are different for
people
living in a different
society
, regarding personal
health
as a
duty
to
society
is unrealistic for some
people
who face disaster or are not well treated by governments.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • duty
  • well-being
  • burden
  • healthcare systems
  • productive
  • economy
  • example
  • empower
  • informed choices
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