Some people believe that old buildings should be protected by law. Others, however, think that they should be replaced by new buildings.
In present-day society, many cities face the issue of whether old
buildings
should be replaced by new buildings
or not. As I see it, old buildings
should be maintained. Historic buildings
certainly have much value in various ways. In the first place, a large number of historic buildings
represent specific historical figures or events. To be more exact, if such
buildings
were razed, there would be no precise representation of the corresponding figures and events anymore. Further
, some historic dwellings embody the unique lifestyle of ethnic groups. Without a doubt, it could be an ethnological disaster if these buildings
were demolished because of current urban needs. Last
but not least, many historic buildings
have outstanding aesthetic value. That means any replication can never show the ancient craftsmanship accurately. Surely, due to
the rapid increase of
urban population, some historic Change preposition
in
buildings
should be knocked down in order to make room for high-rise apartment buildings
. Yet a more sensible solution to this
problem can be developing urban transport so that people can easily live in nearby suburbs and commute easily every day. To conclude
, though old buildings
may have occupied a lot of urban space, their value should not be neglected. In light of the above factors, I firmly believe that historic buildings
must be looked after by modern cities.Submitted by Amanda Monteiro
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite