Some think that ambition is a good quality. Is it important to be ambitious? Is it a positive or negative characteristic? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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gender equality is the most important question to discuss.
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, in a family can be that wife and husband have
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and coming back home they find problems with
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past, both woman and man can be the same busier at
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and have less time for activities at home.
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, before women spent their time doing hose
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and men gained the money being employed at different types of jobs.
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no
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disputes about their
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it felt a balance in the society and the concrete rules of what one or another should do. So, to respect each other
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rights, I believe that they should
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responsability
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responsibility
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, they can make a timetable
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will show
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what day hoe is
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responsible
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, they can hire a person hoe can do
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job for them. I am absolutely in agreement with
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idea, and I think it is the best one. In conclusion, there
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more solution to look for them and
analise
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analyse
the reasons to decide what is more
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convenient
for a family.
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