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As well as making money, businesses have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?

#money #businesses #responsibilities
It is sometimes argued that
beside
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 gaining a profit the
business
 units have to aware of social responsibilities. There are various reasons why money is the most essential thing to run
the
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 businesses.
Firstly
, at the early stage, the
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newborn
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new born
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 businesses need to be more well-known to gain
the
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customers before making an income.
For example
, they need to pay for advertisements.
Secondly
, they need profits to pay the cost
from
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 maintaining
business
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.
For instance
, the money to pay for wages or the cost of fixing the production factories.
Finally
, the rest of
money
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, after paying the cost,
it
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can be invested to expand the
business
 by discovering new
opporutinies
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opportunities
 or researching to form
the
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 better version of products.
Futhermore
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Furthermore
, having contributions to
social
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society
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 can strengthen the
business
’s brand in several ways.
Firstly
, the service’s customers and people in society are the same
group
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 and
that is
 a chance to acquire a new customer segment.
Secondly
, similar to the previous one, the
business
’s employees can gain the benefits from social responsibility, which
this
 impact encourages them to become the royal employee and
that is
 a kind of
business
 gaining.
Finally
, people in
the
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society are likely to recognise the brand that
helping
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 them more than the brands that ignore the people. In conclusion, helping society and gaining
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income can be contributed in parallel for achieving
the
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sustainable
business
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social responsibilities
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Ethical behavior
  • Societal impact
  • Stakeholders
  • Profit-driven
  • Public perception
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Community development
  • Human rights
  • Workplace safety
  • Altruism
  • Balanced approach
  • Accountability
  • Consumer loyalty
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