These days Internet-based courses have become a popular alternative to university-based courses. Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures. Others argued that it is important to study at university. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Opinions are divided as to whether internet-based
courses
are more effective than university-based
courses
. Despite the fact that there are some benefits of taking Internet-based
courses
, I believe that university-based
courses
are usually more productive. There are various reasons why internet-based learning can provide us benefits in some cases.
Firstly
, with only the internet connection,
students
can access
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the same quality of the lessons from anywhere, even in the rural area.
Also
, the huge amounts of time on travelling to the campus can be saved by
this
kind of course.
Secondly
, due to the pandemic,
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from home allows us to be safe and reduce the chance of infection from serious
diseasesse
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diseases
such
as Covid-19.
Finally
, most digital tools can be
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placed only in online sessions.
This
kind of tools can improve
the lessons atmosphere
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the atmosphere of the lesson
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.
For example
, the gamification-based quiz like Kahoot.
On the other hand
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things can not be replaced by online classes.
Firstly
, for STEM degrees, the
students
have to attend the real laboratory, which learners can gain
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real experiences more than online laboratory simulations.
Secondly
, when
students
were assigned the projects, face to face communication is much better than
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meeting, due to they can get
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instant aid between
students
and
students
or between
students
and their project supervisors.
Finally
, online classes are likely to form
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lazy habit, since there is no one can
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the
students
performance, which opposed to the onsite that the peer pressure can be formed by the academic environment. In conclusion, I would argue that
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to taking university-based
courses
are a lot more than internet-based
courses
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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