Many people believe that every individual is responsible for his/her own healthy lifestyle. Others believe that government should take care of it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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habits helps in exhibiting their luxurious life,whereas the truth is it only makes them obese. Some people are cautious in taking care of their health for their future while the rest believe in rejoicing the present. I will pen down the pros and cons of both lifestyles.
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trend changed over a period of time and youngsters are now more into junk foods. Drugs, liquors and narcotics are increasingly used by teenagers,leading to heart attacks and severe injuries at a young age. Despite being educated school children fall into Linking Words
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young men, especially college students are becoming addicts to smoking and street foods.
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contribute towards the public leading a healthy lifestyle by imposing strict and stringent rules to quit smoking and drinking in public areas. Street shops and junk Linking Words
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, the government can offer free vitamin tablets and iron tonics to the public. People can be encouraged and motivated to follow a diet routine in order to stay out of reach from hospitals.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite