Fashion trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to sell clothes. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should dress in what we like and feel comfortable in. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays Fashion is something
to
that everyone wants to embrace. It is a common belief that fashion trends predominantly exist just to sour up consumerism of trendy Change preposition
apply
clothes
, besides
some individuals believe that our appearance should be based on our preferences of wearing clothes
.I totally agree with the writer’s notion and the reasons behind my inclination are articulated in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, there are myriad of reasons which indicate that masses should not blindly follow latest trends and wear what suits on
themselves. Change preposition
apply
Firstly
, individuals should only wear what describe their personalities regardless trends
because Change preposition
of trends
Correct your spelling
it
is
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it
is
not obvious that trendy fashionable Remove the redundancy
apply
clothes
look good on them. Secondly
, some people work in corporate
world , where their appearance matter a lot so for Add an article
the corporate
them
latest Add a comma
,them
clothings
do not mean because it Change the wording
clothing
items of clothing
articles of clothing
look
pompous.
Change the verb form
looks
Furthermore
, it is indeed fact
that the latest trending Add an article
a fact
the fact
clothes
are costly that’s why the ordinary people can’t afford them that’s why they don’t prefer to attire them. For instance
, nowadays brands like nike
, puma and Adidas Change the capitalization
Nike
are sell
their products at Change the verb form
are selling
high
Add an article
a high
cost
which is not affordable for everyone.
Fix the agreement mistake
costs
However
, latest
fashionable Correct article usage
the latest
clothes
are trendy but it is undeniable fact that they are making with quality materials which
are very Correct pronoun usage
that
long lasting
and could not be torn easily. Add a hyphen
long-lasting
Moreover
, youngsters are more into latest wear so that they only tend to wear latest clothes
Correct your spelling
whether
weather
they suit on them or don’t they don’t care.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
whether
although
it is true that latest
products are only meant to rise Correct article usage
the latest
sells
and fame of the company Correct your spelling
sales
but
it is a personal choice what to wear and what not Remove the conjunction
apply
too
regardless; price,quality and material.Correct your spelling
to
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