Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

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is obligatory to gain vast knowledge about any field, especially education it is the key to develop our nation. Few people have thought about

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at

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is the best

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approach to develop them. While

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number of people think

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is the significant place

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them to learn. I strongly concur that children must go to

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for getting knowledge.

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essay will showcase the benefits and the drawbacks of both in the following paragraph with relevant examples. On the one hand, people and kids feel free especially, it is the place as individuals called it a comfort zone. Instruct adolescents at

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is advantageous in many ways,

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, it is a

cost saving

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along with kids get more

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to involve in extra activity,

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, the most significant part is they do not have to wear

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a uniform

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.

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, if parents start

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torturing

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it will save their money

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as they would not have to pay for transportation as well as no need to buy

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uniform.

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, children get more

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to play in spite of they do not have to travel anywhere.

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, there are few demerits of it.

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, there would be a stumbling block especially when it comes

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stage performances or social gatherings.

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, to embark with the key reasons to support my ideology is that,

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is the place where everyone obtains discipline and manner, the value of

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, together with, rules and regulations. It is not neglectable that, if the parents start teaching at

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have various advantages,

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they not be aware of surrounding or social activities, which they could observe or take a part in at

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.

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, children involved in curriculum activities apart from study.

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, they would be more

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, in terms of solving group assignments, sharing thoughts with classmates, giving

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a speech

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in front of the class and so on, so these all help them to be brave and fearless. To conclude, considering above mentioned points it is evident that,

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home

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teaching has many benefits with regard to, reduce expenses and get more

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to play. In my opinion,

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teaching involves more benefits and discipline.