People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life. What are the main problems people in cities face, and how can these problems be tackled?

In metro
cities
, there
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lots of benefits but
also
folks have faced lots of
challenage
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challenge
challenges
in there daily life.
pollution
,
popullation
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population
and
traffic
etc. In
this
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we discussed
about
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this
issue as well as find solutions to solve
this
problem.
To begin
with, Nowadays everyone wants to move to the metro
cities
beacuse
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because
of the facility and
levish
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lavish
life.
People
miggrat
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migrate
from villages to
cities
and it increase
popullation
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population
thats
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that's
make
range
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of problems in day to day
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life
lives
lifes
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lives
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For Example
, there is lots of
traffic
jam in
delhi
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Delhi
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and
people
hit the wall for long hours
specially
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in office
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times. According to the report Delhi is the most polluted
cities
in
india
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that cause so many health
issue
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issues
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like asthma, heart issue . For the solution, The Government should goes to extra
miles
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and do some vital steps
For Instance
, make width roads and
highway
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highways
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for
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try to control
traffic
.
Soecity
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Society
should use public transports that
helps
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in
traffic
also
in air
pollution
. Use CNG cylinders for your own vehicle,
although
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government
govenment
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the govenment
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don't
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have enough CNG pumps. For Air
pollution
Govenment
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Government
try to aware
people
like stop engine in red lights, make strick rule for that
also
grow plants as much as can. Use metro or buses
its
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really help air
pollution
. The
Govenment
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Government
make
rular
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ruler
regular
area more advance and develop so
people
don't go to urban area
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • metropolis
  • commute
  • public transportation
  • gridlock
  • air pollution
  • noise pollution
  • expensive housing
  • exorbitant prices
  • work-life balance
  • recreation areas
  • parks and gardens
  • criminal activities
  • security measures
  • density
  • neighborhood
  • public amenities
  • healthcare facilities
  • educational institutions
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