Some people believe that people have the right to university education, and government should make it free no matter what their financial background. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
The noun phrase personal relationship seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that relationship may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
The phrase most of time may require the use of the article the. Consider inserting the before the noun in your sentence.
The noun phrase family seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase Even in family. Consider adding a comma.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
The phrase most of parents may require the use of the article the. Consider inserting the before the noun in your sentence.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
The noun phrase cell phone seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that the phrase long time may not contain the correct article usage. Consider making a change.
It appears that you are missing a comma or two with the interrupter for example. Consider adding the comma(s).
It appears that the form of the verb show does not work with is in this sentence.
The noun phrase Young generation seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The plural verb are does not appear to agree with the singular subject Young generation. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
The noun phrase older one seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase In the past. Consider adding a comma.
The noun phrase quite different life seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that you have an unnecessary comma in a compound object. Consider removing it.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
The plural verb spend does not appear to agree with the singular subject young generation. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
The word electronics doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The noun phrase notebook seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that notebook may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It appears that the form of the verb agree does not work with am in this sentence.
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Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
- Summary
- Restatement of thesis
- Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
- In conclusion
- To conclude
- To summarize
- Finally
- In a nutshell
- In general