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advantage and disadvantage of telling children that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough.

#advantage #children
convincing
children
 that hard
work
 can fulfil everything they want is popular in some nations.
This
message
 has a powerful impact to encourage them and motivating them to pursue their goals.
however
, it might be the main cause for their sadness, their depression and their loneliness. On the one hand, it is really beneficial to tell
this
message
 for the young generation as it is considered as a kind of encouragement
message
 to push them to follow their dreams.
In other words
, when
children
 believe that they have to
work
 hard to reach their goals, they understand that nothing will achieve easy, and they should make a vast effort to have what they deserve.
Moreover
,
this
message
 tells
children
 that they may encounter various challenges to achieve what they desired, so that they have to try again and again, and after a long journey of ups and downs they will touch their success.
On the other hand
,
this
message
 may lead to a negative impact on
children
 lives when
children
 imagine that they can achieve what they want if they have strong persistence.
Firstly
,
children
 may have unrealistic targets in their minds.
for instance
, they may have a plan to be millionaires at the age of eighteen, and it is most of the time impossible.
secondly
,
children
 may
work
 hard and do their best, but they don'
t
 achieve their purposes. some students,
for example
, study all the time to be the top students in their class but they don'
t
 fulfil what they want. and
this
 is because their capabilities are limited ,and
this
 is a normal situation.
This
 will make them feel sad, disappointed and isolated in the worst case. to conclude, it is extremely positive and good to motivate youth by telling them that they can achieve what they want if they
work
 hard, but
also
 have an awful impact if they
work
 hard and they don'
t
 reach their ambition. so that, it is really much more beneficial if they understand that they may
work
 hard ,but unfortunately, they don'
t
 achieve their dreams because other people
deserve
Correct pronoun usage
itdeserve
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