advantage and disadvantage of telling children that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough.

convincing

children

that hard

work

can fulfil everything they want is popular in some nations.

This

message

has a powerful impact to encourage them and motivating them to pursue their goals.

however

, it might be the main cause for their sadness, their depression and their loneliness. On the one hand, it is really beneficial to tell

this

message

for the young generation as it is considered as a kind of encouragement

message

to push them to follow their dreams.

In other words

, when

children

believe that they have to

work

hard to reach their goals, they understand that nothing will achieve easy, and they should make a vast effort to have what they deserve.

Moreover

,

this

message

tells

children

that they may encounter various challenges to achieve what they desired, so that they have to try again and again, and after a long journey of ups and downs they will touch their success.

On the other hand

,

this

message

may lead to a negative impact on

children

lives when

children

imagine that they can achieve what they want if they have strong persistence.

Firstly

,

children

may have unrealistic targets in their minds.

for instance

, they may have a plan to be millionaires at the age of eighteen, and it is most of the time impossible.

secondly

,

children

may

work

hard and do their best, but they don'

t

achieve their purposes. some students,

for example

, study all the time to be the top students in their class but they don'

t

fulfil what they want. and

this

is because their capabilities are limited ,and

this

is a normal situation.

This

will make them feel sad, disappointed and isolated in the worst case. to conclude, it is extremely positive and good to motivate youth by telling them that they can achieve what they want if they

work

hard, but

also

have an awful impact if they

work

hard and they don'

t

reach their ambition. so that, it is really much more beneficial if they understand that they may

work

hard ,but unfortunately, they don'

t

achieve their dreams because other people

deserve

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