Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and methods of preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

by advancing technologies, fast and packed cuisine has become the most popular way to eat meals and it is very widespread for modern society. It means that the public doesn't want to cook their meals. I completely disagree that
people
want to have easy
food
more and more.
First
of all, as times go by,
people
start to aware importance of the meal. In fact, nowadays
people
want to eat healthy cuisine, even though they know most
convenience
foods are not healthy
such
as fast
food
and frozen-packed meals from
convenience
stores.
however
, traditional cooking is that normally used fresh ingredients and eat right after cooking, whereas
convenience
food
is cooked unknown ingredients. What's more, the nation thinks that authentic
food
, which their parents cooked for them. It makes the family remind their memory.
Thus
, they can remember their family.
Secondly
, Authentic
food
means representing each country's culture. The human being they always have been keeping their culture throughout history. It means the crowd want to preserve their traditional
food
.
For example
, some folk still cook their meal even if it takes so long and inconvenient.
Moreover
, some population think that fast cooking is not as delicious as traditional
food
.
That is
because its tastes are very artificial,
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most of the traditional
food
's tastes are very natural.
hence
, folk often go to the restaurant for authentic and traditional. To conclude,
although
there will be a lot of fast foods and easy foods are produced more and more,
people
know what is healthy and beneficial for them.
Also
, they want to keep their identity.
convenience
food
cannot replace traditional
food
.
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