Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situations Such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.others argue that is better to try and improve Such situations . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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While some persons are of the opinion that it is better to accept an unpleasant situation
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as an unsatisfactory
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or low funds, others are of the suggestion, and I believe, that acquiring a skill can help enhance
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. On the one hand, due to the rising level of unemployment, some individuals claim that it is best to accept an unpleasant opportunity.
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is because we have too many
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after a limited number of
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offers and for
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reason, in Nigeria,
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, most graduates pick up jobs that do not have
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workplace
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with low pay, just to stay off the unemployment space.
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of the
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need to get a
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amongst many, some would argue that these prospective employees should accept whatever work they get.
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, I do not agree
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claim as they should be compensated well for their efforts.
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, skill acquisition has been proposed to help advert a situation whereby
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go for low paid jobs. By learning different skills
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as tailoring, soap making etc, these individuals are taught to be self-reliant and independent to enable them
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for their daily needs. In a bid to ensure that
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have enough financial resources to tackle their day-to-day expenses,
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, the federal government of Nigeria trains
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new graduate to acquire
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essential skills during their service year. By so doing,
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would no longer be pressured to take up jobs that do not have a befitting pay and
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conducive
work environment. In conclusion, despite the fact that many are of the opinion that prospective employees should take up any
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disposal irrespective of the conditions surrounding it,
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others
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suggest
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and I agree that individuals should be trained to be
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self-employed
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unsatisfactory
  • shortage
  • facilitating
  • personal growth
  • resilience
  • acknowledging one's limits
  • within one's control
  • actively seeking
  • professional development
  • circumstances
  • practical standpoint
  • coping mechanism
  • mental health
  • well-being
  • self-efficacy
  • entrepreneurship
  • obstacles
  • temporary solace
  • feasible option
  • striving for improvement
  • embodies
  • human spirit
  • thrive in adversity
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