A new sports centre has opened in your area. You want to visit the new sports centre and get some information. Write an letter to your friend to invite him/her.
Dear Sara ,
I hope
this
letter finds you in good health and high spirits. In the past month, I have been thinking about changing my lifestyle and decided to pay more attention to my health
I’m writing to extend a warm invitation to you to join me at my sports club, Pure Gym
, located in London Finchly
.
Pure Correct your spelling
Finchley
gym
boasts state-of-the-art facilities and a wide range of amenities to cater to all Capitalize word
Gym
fitness
levels and preferences. From modern workout equipment and spacious exercise areas to dedicated group fitness
classes and personal training services, Pure gym
provides a well-rounded Capitalize word
Gym
fitness
experience.
Furthermore
, I am excited to share some incredible offers exclusively available for new members like myself. Upon joining Pure gym
, you will receive a complimentary Capitalize word
Gym
fitness
assessment and a personalized workout plan tailored to your goals and needs.
Additionally
, they offer discounted rates for annual memberships.
I suggest you come to visit the sports club on Sunday morning.Its route from your home is very easy and fast by bus. I look forward to seeing you at Pure Gym
and sharing the joy of fitness
with you.
Love
MahsaSubmitted by sinamousavi078 on
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Task Achievement
To enhance task achievement, ensure that the letter contains all relevant information, such as the time to meet at the sports centre or additional contact details for your friend to respond to the invitation.
Coherence
Improve coherence by using a variety of linking words and phrases to better connect ideas and paragraphs.
Cohesion
For cohesion, ensure each paragraph sticks to a single idea about the invitation or information about the sports centre.
Tone
Start with a more personal greeting and end with a warmer closing to maintain consistency in the writing tone.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,