The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three counties.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three counties.
The three pie charts illustrate the method of disposal of risky waste in South
Korea
,
Sweden
and the United Kingdom.
It is clear that
the
Republic
of
Korea
and
Sweden
get rid of harmful waste in exactly the same ways
on the contrary
with various numbers by recycling, incineration and underground. By the way, the most selected way in the
Republic
of
Korea
is recycled,
whereas
Sweden
is buried underground. The figures are 69 per
cent
and 59 per
cent
respectively.
On the other hand
, the
Republic
of
Korea
destroys
this
garbage underground by 22 per
cent
.
In addition
, only 9 per
cent
of incineration
use
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in the
Republic
of
Korea
conversely
20 per
cent
in
Sweden
with 5 per
cent
less than recycling.
However
, there is 8 per
cent
of both chemical treatment and dumping at sea apply only in the United Kingdom. On top of that underground hazardous rubbish is the most popular in
this
country.
Nevertheless
, it is hardly found incineration here with about 2 per
cent
.
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