The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three counties.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three counties.
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The three pie charts illustrate the method of disposal of risky waste in South
Korea
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,
Sweden
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and the United Kingdom.
It is clear that
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the
Republic
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of
Korea
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and
Sweden
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get rid of harmful waste in exactly the same ways
on the contrary
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with various numbers by recycling, incineration and underground. By the way, the most selected way in the
Republic
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of
Korea
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is recycled,
whereas
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Sweden
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is buried underground. The figures are 69 per
cent
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and 59 per
cent
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respectively.
On the other hand
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, the
Republic
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of
Korea
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destroys
this
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garbage underground by 22 per
cent
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.
In addition
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, only 9 per
cent
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of incineration
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in the
Republic
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of
Korea
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conversely
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20 per
cent
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in
Sweden
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with 5 per
cent
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less than recycling.
However
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, there is 8 per
cent
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of both chemical treatment and dumping at sea apply only in the United Kingdom. On top of that underground hazardous rubbish is the most popular in
this
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country.
Nevertheless
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, it is hardly found incineration here with about 2 per
cent
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.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words korea, sweden, republic, cent with synonyms.
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