News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper. What focus do you think influence these decisions? Do we become to used to bad news, and would it be better more good news was reported?

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It is often argued that the news the population has access to is chosen by an editor. The paragraphs below will discuss why the information shared depends on its power to attract and to catch attention, why people are accustomed to witnessing tragedies and why reading or watching reports with good endings would help to change

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scenario.

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with, among news many roles, the main one is to astonish the public. It does not matter if the event speaks about a serial killer that has been attacking recently. The logical idea is to

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people’s attention and to foment a debate over the topic, creating a trending issue.

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, there is a Brazilian tv program that shows assaults and murders in a specific region of the country. Despite being perturbing, the reporter films cases of

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chase and accidents which have an air of suspense and drama that hold the viewers watching.

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, due to the negative and shocking nature of these events people has given up on their empathy and humanity to give way to curiosity. To illustrate,

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racism is a current important social problem, its daily occurrence has made individuals ask themselves what it is going to happen

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as if they were used to it. As a

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matter, posting more about amusing news would restore the faith and hope toward good information, because it would expose positive results with different outcomes, breaking the cycle. To conclude, editors mostly focus on posting events that would endure viewers concentrated, despite the chaotic and troublesome nature of what is being posted.

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recurrent distribution of problematic information causes a sense of naturalness and normality, which is not, and should be combated by posting more happy stories.

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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper. What focus do you think influence these decisions? Do we become to used to bad news, and would it be better more good news was reported?

Your opinion

should human adapt to technology or should technology be adapted to us? Is technology making us intellectually weaker or more intelligent? Discuss both views and give your point.

Some people believe citizens should be allowed to carry handguns in order to protect themselves, while others think this can lead to many social security problems in the society. What's your opinion? Use specific reasons to support your answer

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In most countries, prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide education for those who violate the law. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe that it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.