Overcrowding in cities is often created when people move from rural to urban areas. What are some problems associated with overcrowding? What can governments do to prevent this issue?

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Can you imagine living life in the immensely crowded city or being on the same train with people twice the number of the train’s capacity? Nowadays, overpopulation in several major
cities
around the world is addressed as one of the serious problems.
This
issue
is normally caused by the
migration
of people from rural areas to
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places that are more urbanized.
However
,
this
migration
can be followed by a number of problems requiring
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serious actions from governments to take in order to prevent them.
First
of all,
pollution
is
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associated with
overcrowding
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problem
. When there are too many people in a particular place, there will be the overuse of energy leading to
emission
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the emission
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of exhaust or
waste water
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which are considered as air and land
pollution
.
Furthermore
, noise
pollution
is another
issue
that cannot be avoided as it can be from the vehicles on the streets, industries or
entertaining
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venues. Another
problem
is
crime
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a crime
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.
This
problem
is almost unavoidable in the
cities
with overpopulation
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. One reason might lie in the fact that it is more convenient to commit
crime
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crowd which is difficult to be noticed.
For example
, the percentage of theft in the
cities
which are tourist attractions tend to be higher than those in rural areas. What the governments can do to prevent the mentioned
problem
is to limit the
migration
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each year and have the migrants registered.
This
will be able to control the
number of
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population in the city.
Moreover
, the registration will facilitate the governments with the information of the migrants in case they would like to
issue
any
further
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in the future. To summarize, the major problems resulted from overcrowding in the
cities
are
pollution
and crime. The actions that the government can take are
limit
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the amount of
migration
rate annually as well as register the migrants. If they can successfully do
this
, the trend of overcrowded
cities
will be eliminated in the future.
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