Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effect on young children To what extent do you agree and disagree with this opinion ? 11.19

It is thought that utilizing a computer can have additional disadvantageous than advantageous in the younger age group. I completely agree with
this
and believe that it does have a negative effect on their life.
First
of all, there will be a huge decline in social contact with family and friends. The reason for
this
is that they spend most of their day at home behind the tv or computer, which is
also
increasing the chance of addiction.
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, PS4 and
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are really
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popular
these days in younger children and most of their counterparts can spend hours of time behind those electric devices. So that's why
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it is not beneficial for them to use the computer more often.
Secondly
, there will be a rise in health problems. The reason for
this
is that
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it will
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effect
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the
youngsters
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eyes and it is
also
not beneficial for their mental health.
For example
, more and more children are wearing glasses these days because they were been exposed to technology from a young age.
Furthermore
, a lot of
upbringers
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upbringings
up bringers
will see it as break time but it actually no
satifcation
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satisfaction
in
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this
habit.
Thus
,
this
is why it should be avoided to watch a lot of
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. To conclude, I strongly believe that electric
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devices
device
can have
a negative effects
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on the
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child's
childs
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life when
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been used in a daily routine
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because it is having a bad effect on their social life and health.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cyber safety
  • screen time
  • cognitive development
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • social isolation
  • digital literacy
  • interactive learning
  • virtual communication
  • physical well-being
  • academic performance
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