The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs depict the percentage of households owning
electron
devices, Replace the word
electronic
such
as washing machine
, refrigerators and vacuum
cleaner and their housework time in a particular country from 1920 and 2019.
Overall
, it can be seen that,
over the period as a whole the ownership of electrical appliances rose in all three categories. Remove the comma
apply
On the contrary
, the amount of time spent on household chores declined in given years.
In the year 1920, there was no household with refrigerator
, Correct article usage
a refrigerator
while
30% of families had vacuum
cleaner
and 40% of them had Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
washing
Add an article
a washing
machine
. The number of Fix the agreement mistake
machines
owners
of washing machine
and Fix the agreement mistake
machines
vacuum
cleaner
both increased by 20% during the Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
next
two decades, whereas
families with refrigerator
experienced a significant rise to around 55%. Despite some downward trend in washing Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
machine
owners
from 1960 to 1980, they all then
followed a similar trend, increased steadily to 100% (refrigerator and vacuum
cleaner owners
) and about 74% (washing machine
owners
).
As given in the second
chart, people spent 50 hours
per week
on
doing housework in 1920. Change preposition
apply
However
, the amount of housework dropped considerably to reach 20 hours
per week
in 1960. After
this
, it fall again in 1980, reaching approximately 15 hours
per week
. Over the next
two decades, the number of hours
remained static, after which this
figure decreased slightly to finish the period at around 11 hours
per week
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