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Over the last few decades, the media has promoted the image of young thin women a being ideal. What problems has this caused? What solutions can you suggest to this issue?

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In the past few years, it has been seen that the youngest slim female is considered as an ideal in the industry of media. I will discuss the obstacles and giving a valid solution for
this
 issue in the following paragraph. No doubt it is the foremost part of the model to look less fatty in the films or in the modelling. But it creates many obstacles for the obesity and unhealthy people who have a dream to be work as
a role models
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a role model
role models
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 due to that many committed suicides and others go into depression.
Moreover
, some tend to become career-driven and developed many health-related eating disorders
such
 as anorexia which make their body weak.
Furthermore
,
such
 careers have a short shelf life and mostly the women crossing the age of 30 have a rare opportunity to find a job. One way to overcome
this
 problem is to encourage the media to show realistic programs.
For instance
, movies that show women's like thin or younger
instead
 present them as strong, independent and
an individual professionals
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individual professionals
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 so that it inspires the generation more. For
this
, ladies like mother Teresa's is a powerful inspiring person. Another explanation is to do physical activities rather than more dieting. It is good to be health-conscious for that make a schedule which balances our body and put away us from committing any serious action against a life. To be concluded the media must aware the public that it is not necessary to be young and thin in order to be perfect. The thing matters more is that women should be educated and independent so that she will see its future in every field to get success and
also
 bring change to settle in the society.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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